Wednesday, April 1, 2015

The Crow Reboot (Unofficial)

Prologue
Eric Draven, Shelly Draven and their daughter Holly are driving into the mountains for a camping trip. Once they arrive, a strange woman approaches them. Shelly takes the initiative and approaches her while Eric stays behind with Holly. From Eric’s vantage point they seem to be arguing. The old lady leaves.

Later that night, Eric is playing the acoustic guitar while Shelly and Holly sing along. Out of the darkness, a group of black robed figures appear.

Shelly: Oh god, Eric, I’m so sorry.

Eric: What is this?

A coven of witches, led by Shelly’s grandmother make ritual sacrifices of Eric and Holly. The ceremony empowers Shelly with dark magicks and by the time they finish Eric off (cutting his throat) she is drunk on the power and an active participant in the torture and killing of her husband.

Act 1

Eric is left in the woods in a shallow grave marked by a rock with a pentagram carved into it. One year later, The Crow shits on the pentagram then lands and begins pecking at the rock, breaking the symbol.

Eric rises from the grave screaming in rage and confusion. He dons a tattered black robe hanging in a tree and begins the long walk to civilization. As he goes, he remembers the betrayal, his murder and his daughter’s murder.

A trucker picks him up off the street and takes him home. He finds his house deserted and boarded up. As he explores it he finds most of the photos and things of sentimental value disheveled, some shattered, but still there. Anything of value has long been looted, auctioned or vandalized.

He pulls a trunk down from the attic crawl space marked Halloween. From it he dons the robes of his station. He uses grease paint and lipstick to make his face into a ghostly harlequin.

He goes into his garage and pulls out in a jet black, 1947 Mercury Sedan. It’s in poor condition, but the engine rumbles as though the crow brought it back from the dead with Eric.

Act 2

Eric pulls up to his Mother-in-Law’s residence and slips around behind it. He peers in the window and sees three women sitting drinking tea together. He has flashbacks as he recognizes them from the coven. Just before he smashes through the window, they kick over the table and reveal a shotgun, blowing Eric back into the garden. His Mom in law ducks out the back while the other two press the attack. One muttering strange incantations that give Eric visions of demon’s tearing at his clothes, the other filling him full of buckshot. He lays in the garden, apparently dead. The two witches approach him. The shotgun wielding witch nudges him with her toe while keeping the gun trained on him. Eric’s eyes pop open and he slaps the barrel, causing the witch to spin and shoot her companion. Before she can draw back down on Eric, he holds a piece of shattered glass to her throat from behind.

Eric: Let’s talk.

Cut to police coming on the scene and finding two murdered, middle aged women and evidence of an epic gun battle. Albricht sees the Sedan pulling away.

Sgt. Albricht of the County Sheriff’s Department is interviewing the neighbors and is doubting the description of the melee. The detectives arrive on scene and find one of the witches hung from a nearby tree, spinning slow circles. Her back faces camera and reveals a crow has been carved into her flesh, tatters of dress flutter in the wind.

Cut To

Draven is in the bell tower of a church, hanging the second witch off the ledge.

The Crow: WHERE IS SHE?

Witch: I don’t know, oh save me Dark Lord, I don’t know

The Crow: Your totems have no power here! The playing field has been leveled and you are weak without your coven. You have nothing left but my mercy! Reveal yourself and be judged!

Witch: They meet at the bingo hall on 4th and cedar. Please. Your mercy! Please

The Crow: Your faith is weak. My mercy is weaker. Tell your master! Tell him after I finish with his servants I will deal with him.

He drops the witch from the bell tower. Her blood spreads like wings around her.

Back at the police station, Albricht tracks down the Sedan and the last registered address. Which connects to the report Shelly filed that her daughter fell in the river and her husband drowned trying to rescue her. He decides to investigate the residence.

Eric returns to his abandoned home and pulls out his guitar. He plays a few dissonant tones (it’s long since gone out of tune) and smashes it into a mirror, screaming with rage. The bird caws loudly in response. As Eric walks out of the home, he runs into Albricht.

Albricht: Police! Don’t move! I said: Don’t Move!

Draven: I thought the police always said “freeze.”

Albricht: Well I am the police and I said “Don’t move,” You move, moon face, you’re dead.

Draven: Well I say “I’m dead and I move”

The stand-off escalates and Draven confesses that his wife was responsible for the murder and she has allies in the sleepy town. The crow distracts Albricht and Dravens slips away and dives into his car. A short chase ensues and Eric manages to lose Albricht in the dark.

Cut to, Shelly, in her office on top of an Arts and Crafts store is meeting with several other members of the coven including Shelly’s mother. Shelly is angered that a totem has chosen Draven to be an agent of righteous vengeance and blames her mother for escaping while their sisters died.

Shelly: If we abandon each other, we will have no power to defend ourselves. That said, mother dear, you must be punished for your cowardice.

Shelly plucks out her mother’s right eye as the other witches hold her down. They use it to cast a scrying spell to find Draven. They are disturbed to see him about to attack their base of operations, currently being used by a large number of witches to perform a blood sacrifice.

At the Bingo Hall, a small child is being tormented by hooded and masked witches. Before they can kill her, the doors fly open!

Draven: BINGO BITCHES!

A battle ensues, the witches are well armed and have various melee weapons and firearms. Draven shields the child with his body and after the shooting stops he stands back up.

Draven: You gain power from the innocent! See what happens when the innocent rise up! (To the child) Under the table, you are saved.

Draven moves from witch to witch, economically dealing with them in quick succession.
After the carnage, Deputy Albricht finds more evidence that the coven aren’t as innocent as they seem and begins to put it together.

Back at his house, Eric is waiting for him. They talk about the nature of revenge, marriage and family. Eric admits that he doesn’t know what he will do when he faces Shelly.
After he leaves, Albricht is taken captive by the witches.

Act 3

Eric drives out into the woods to find Albricht and the rest of the witches. Shelly hexes Eric as he closes in. Eric relives the night his daughter died and his own death, causing him to crash his car into a tree. He wakes up tied down with Albricht, a sacrifice to the dark lord.

Shelly taunts him, telling him she always knew it would end like this, that she hoped it would be different, but inside she always felt Eric was weak and fit only to serve her. The crow (the actually bird) appears and distracts the coven as they try to catch it.

SHELLY: Take it! Take its power! What we could do with such a powerful totem is limitless!

The bird leads the coven on a merry chase as Albricht and Eric work together to escape their bonds. Unfortunately, Shelly manages to wing the bird with a thrown knife and it crashes to the ground. She picks it up.

SHELLY: This is all the power you ever had and now it’s mine.

The bird attacks Shelly’s eyes, but she manages to bat it away, suffering only cosmetic damage.

SHELLY: Is that it? Is that all you have left?

ERIC: No. I have this.

Eric grapples with Shelly, she stabs him, but he keeps coming even without his healing abilities.

ERIC: What is wrong with you! OUR DAUGHTER! OUR DAUGHTER! HOW COULD YOU!

Albricht dispatches the last witches with a tree branch and goes to help Eric.

ERIC: No! This is my fight. My vengeance.

Without the coven, Shelly begins to wake up from power mad reverie. She begs forgiveness, begs for death. Begs for Eric to rescue her.

ERIC: Live with it. Live with it every day. That’s the only forgiveness you can have is the forgiveness you give yourself. I’m done fighting. I go to our daughter’s side now. Albricht, take her away.


Shelly cries as Albricht cuffs her and Eric walks into the woods, back to his shallow grave. He has another vision and sees his daughter, holding her hand out to her. Together, they walk into the light.